[Critique Request] Calamity

Calamity
by Eternity


Calamity, my lady in red
I give, you take away
Robbed, I am bleeding by the bed
Forgotten, I fade away

Calamity, my brother in arms
We fight the unseen
I seen no end to these harms
You embrace such filth

Calamity, my eternal rival
Robbed and forgotten
No end to the fighting
Faded, flithy and rotten

Calamity, destroyer of worlds
Masses become mumbles
Wretches become howls
Bloodied, broken and in fumbles

Calm, I lay myself flat
Release the lady in red
Stop the brother in arms
Release the eternal rival
Smile to the destroyer of worlds

Seen, but never forgotten