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Re: Possible NaruHina Scenarios
by GreatKungLao Mon Aug 05, 2013 8:31 am
https://youtu.be/NhjS1IbIbS0?t=15m35s
Something like that would be so sweet. Hinata been unconscious after the end of the battle and Naruto is trying to wake up her and when he finally success, they meet each other with eyes and read each other's feelings through each other's eyes, just like in this video with Guy and Rose from Street Fighter.
Something like that would be so sweet. Hinata been unconscious after the end of the battle and Naruto is trying to wake up her and when he finally success, they meet each other with eyes and read each other's feelings through each other's eyes, just like in this video with Guy and Rose from Street Fighter.
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Re: Possible NaruHina Scenarios
by Mustang Fri Aug 09, 2013 12:23 am
Here is a scenario that might be the best one I have done yet, (yes my brain is working in overdrive, lol)
Hope you all enjoyed it yes the flashbacks sort of set the tone in this, but this is one of the ways I see it going down.
- a NaruHina moment:
- Juubito: in the end you will have no one, nothing to return to, so why do you resist?
Naruto: (smiles and thinks about the events of chapter 615, remembers Hinata's confession and when she stood up for him) I have never been good at giving up, and you are wrong I do have someone to return to.
Juubito: ?????
Naruto: (flashback to him holding Hinata's hand,) (seeing Hinata smile while she squeezes his hand in reply to him) I might have been oblivious in the past, but I know what love is.
Juubito: You have no idea what love is, you have never no idea what it's like to lose a loved one, but then again you were too young to know what I did to your parents.
Naruto: that might be the case, but at least I know that I have three suns.
Juubito: Three suns? you are more pathetic than I anyone i have ever killed, your existence must come to an end.
Naruto: Pathetic? oh well, I guess I am not that perfect after all, something I am willing to admit, but you seem to think that everything must be picture perfect, for me someone is there who thinks that I am not perfect but I find a way to pick myself up regardless of how bad things get, (flashback to the proud Failure moment)
Juubito: What are you getting at Naruto?
Naruto: (smirks at Juubito) you gave up because things got too bad for you, but there was one who taught me that no matter how bad things get there is always light.
Juubito: that person must be a loser like you.
Naruto: no she isn't a loser, her name is Hinata Hyuuga, she is the one waiting for me to come back safely, she is the one that inspires me to fight when I need to, she is the one who helped me meet my parents and she is the one who showed me what love was, I guess I have a lot to thank her for.
Juubito: well then she will die right next to you.
Naruto: There is no saving you, but I know full well that Neji's sacrifice will not be in vain, he died protecting Hinata and me, I would be the worst ninja alive if I didn't honour him and live up to a promise I made nearly three years ago (flashback to the Chunin exams with his fight against Neji). Now I will take on the task that he left me, to protect Hinata, because I love her!(he charges up his senjutsu and powers up his Rasengan)
Hope you all enjoyed it yes the flashbacks sort of set the tone in this, but this is one of the ways I see it going down.
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Re: Possible NaruHina Scenarios
by Irielo Fri Aug 09, 2013 12:29 am
That's a good one too. And coming clearly from Naruto this time. NS just gets swept away if that happens.51-mustang wrote:Here is a scenario that might be the best one I have done yet, (yes my brain is working in overdrive, lol)
- a NaruHina moment:
Naruto: (smiles and thinks about the events of chapter 615, remembers Hinata's confession and when she stood up for him) I have never been good at giving up, and you are wrong I do have someone to return to.
Juubito: ?????
Naruto: (flashback to him holding Hinata's hand,) (seeing Hinata smile while she squeezes his hand in reply to him) I might have been oblivious in the past, but I know what love is.
Juubito: You have no idea what love is, you have never no idea what it's like to lose a loved one, but then again you were too young to know what I did to your parents.
Naruto: that might be the case, but at least I know that I have three suns.
Juubito: Three suns? you are than pathetic than I anyone i have ever killed, your existence must come to an end.
Naruto: Pathetic? oh well, I guess I am not that perfect after all, something I am willing to admit, but you seem to think that everything must be picture perfect, for me someone is there who thinks that I am not perfect but I find a way to pick myself up regardless of how bad things get, (flashback to the proud Failure moment)
Juubito: What are you getting at Naruto?
Naruto: (smirks at Juubito) you gave up because things got too bad for you, but there was one who taught me that no matter how bad things get there is always light.
Juubito: that person must be a loser like you.
Naruto: no she isn't a loser, her name is Hinata Hyuuga, she is the one waiting for me to come back safely, she is the one that inspires me to fight when I need to, she is the one who helped me meet my parents and she is the one who showed me what love was, I guess I have a lot to thank her for.
Juubito: well then she will die right next to you.
Naruto: There is no saving you, but I know full well that Neji's sacrifice will not be in vain, he died protecting Hinata and me, I would be the worst ninja alive if I didn't honour him and live up to a promise I made nearly three years ago (flashback to the Chunin exams with his fight against Neji). Now I will take on the task that he left me, to protect Hinata, because I love her!(he charges up his senjutsu and powers up his Rasengan)
Hope you all enjoyed it yes the flashbacks sort of set the tone in this, but this is one of the ways I see it going down.
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Re: Possible NaruHina Scenarios
by lily567 Fri Aug 09, 2013 12:36 am
that's an excellent scenarioIrielo wrote:That's a good one too. And coming clearly from Naruto this time. NS just gets swept away if that happens.51-mustang wrote:Here is a scenario that might be the best one I have done yet, (yes my brain is working in overdrive, lol)
- a NaruHina moment:
Naruto: (smiles and thinks about the events of chapter 615, remembers Hinata's confession and when she stood up for him) I have never been good at giving up, and you are wrong I do have someone to return to.
Juubito: ?????
Naruto: (flashback to him holding Hinata's hand,) (seeing Hinata smile while she squeezes his hand in reply to him) I might have been oblivious in the past, but I know what love is.
Juubito: You have no idea what love is, you have never no idea what it's like to lose a loved one, but then again you were too young to know what I did to your parents.
Naruto: that might be the case, but at least I know that I have three suns.
Juubito: Three suns? you are than pathetic than I anyone i have ever killed, your existence must come to an end.
Naruto: Pathetic? oh well, I guess I am not that perfect after all, something I am willing to admit, but you seem to think that everything must be picture perfect, for me someone is there who thinks that I am not perfect but I find a way to pick myself up regardless of how bad things get, (flashback to the proud Failure moment)
Juubito: What are you getting at Naruto?
Naruto: (smirks at Juubito) you gave up because things got too bad for you, but there was one who taught me that no matter how bad things get there is always light.
Juubito: that person must be a loser like you.
Naruto: no she isn't a loser, her name is Hinata Hyuuga, she is the one waiting for me to come back safely, she is the one that inspires me to fight when I need to, she is the one who helped me meet my parents and she is the one who showed me what love was, I guess I have a lot to thank her for.
Juubito: well then she will die right next to you.
Naruto: There is no saving you, but I know full well that Neji's sacrifice will not be in vain, he died protecting Hinata and me, I would be the worst ninja alive if I didn't honour him and live up to a promise I made nearly three years ago (flashback to the Chunin exams with his fight against Neji). Now I will take on the task that he left me, to protect Hinata, because I love her!(he charges up his senjutsu and powers up his Rasengan)
Hope you all enjoyed it yes the flashbacks sort of set the tone in this, but this is one of the ways I see it going down.
naruto tells obito how he understands what love was and that unlike him who gave up, there was someone(hinata as well as his parents) who didn't give up on him and who believed in him and that is how he got so far
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Re: Possible NaruHina Scenarios
by racefan1992 Fri Aug 09, 2013 6:03 am
My awsome meter just blew up, you owe me a new one. :-P51-mustang wrote:Here is a scenario that might be the best one I have done yet, (yes my brain is working in overdrive, lol)
- a NaruHina moment:
Naruto: (smiles and thinks about the events of chapter 615, remembers Hinata's confession and when she stood up for him) I have never been good at giving up, and you are wrong I do have someone to return to.
Juubito: ?????
Naruto: (flashback to him holding Hinata's hand,) (seeing Hinata smile while she squeezes his hand in reply to him) I might have been oblivious in the past, but I know what love is.
Juubito: You have no idea what love is, you have never no idea what it's like to lose a loved one, but then again you were too young to know what I did to your parents.
Naruto: that might be the case, but at least I know that I have three suns.
Juubito: Three suns? you are more pathetic than I anyone i have ever killed, your existence must come to an end.
Naruto: Pathetic? oh well, I guess I am not that perfect after all, something I am willing to admit, but you seem to think that everything must be picture perfect, for me someone is there who thinks that I am not perfect but I find a way to pick myself up regardless of how bad things get, (flashback to the proud Failure moment)
Juubito: What are you getting at Naruto?
Naruto: (smirks at Juubito) you gave up because things got too bad for you, but there was one who taught me that no matter how bad things get there is always light.
Juubito: that person must be a loser like you.
Naruto: no she isn't a loser, her name is Hinata Hyuuga, she is the one waiting for me to come back safely, she is the one that inspires me to fight when I need to, she is the one who helped me meet my parents and she is the one who showed me what love was, I guess I have a lot to thank her for.
Juubito: well then she will die right next to you.
Naruto: There is no saving you, but I know full well that Neji's sacrifice will not be in vain, he died protecting Hinata and me, I would be the worst ninja alive if I didn't honour him and live up to a promise I made nearly three years ago (flashback to the Chunin exams with his fight against Neji). Now I will take on the task that he left me, to protect Hinata, because I love her!(he charges up his senjutsu and powers up his Rasengan)
Hope you all enjoyed it yes the flashbacks sort of set the tone in this, but this is one of the ways I see it going down.
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Re: Possible NaruHina Scenarios
by Aelita Fri Aug 09, 2013 9:12 am
I really like this one! The characterization and dialogue are really good. I especially enjoyed the imagery in the scene where Naruto notices Hinata, really well done. Do you write fanfiction?SenpaiSamaSan wrote:
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Most all Konoha forces have been at home for two days since war's end, all except the Hokage, a few other high ranking Jounins and a certain blonde ninja who were asked to stay in the Land of Lightning for "talks". Needless to say they were all relieved when those "talks" had finished.
*Reaching the Gates*
Naruto: Gah! Finally! My feet are killing me. I don't see the reason why I had to stay back there.
Tsunade: Stop complaining, you should have payed attention to the proceedings as you are going to have to do such things if you ever want to be Hokage.
Naruto: *sulks*
Kotetsu: *standing at attention* Hokage-sama, everything has already been prepared for your arrival. The elders are expecting you.
Tsunade: Oh great... well, might as well get this over with. Naruto!
Naruto: W-what!?
Tsunade: You're free to go, you have the day off, just don't do anything stupid and piss me off.
Naruto: Yahoo!... Wait, What? What do you mean!?
Tsunade: Just don't be yourself! *Nice guy pose*. Well, I'm off to see what those old farts want. See Ya! *poof*
Naruto: Harsh... I wonder what everyone else is up to.
Walking through Konoha, Naruto reminisces about the war and the people that gave their lives to protect what they believed in... to protect him.
Sakura: Hey, Naruto! *Waves*
*Naruto looks up and sees Sakura with Team 10, all of them carrying white flowers*
Naruto: Oh, hey guys! Hehe, I know I'm the hero and all but you don't need to give me flowers, a bowl of ra-
Sakura: Idiot!...*solemnly* We're heading to the memorial stone, these flowers are for the fallen.
Naruto: *embarrassed* Oh.. uhm.. mind if I join you guys?
Chouji: *smiles* Sure, you can pay your respects too.. here. *passes him a bunch of flowers*
Ino: So what happened in Lightning country? Why'd you need to stay?
Naruto: Nah, it was just a bunch of partying and political stuff. People wanted to congratulate me. *sigh*
Shikamaru: *opens one eye and looks at Naruto* That sounds troublesome.
Naruto: Hehe, what do you mean? It was kind of cool being recognized by all those people. *smiles*
Shikamaru: *Stares at Naruto a moment before turning* Hmm... we're here.
The group surrounded the memorial stone, Sakura and Ino being the first to go forward, Sakuro supporting the other girl when she found her father's name. Chouji left his flowers and lit some of the incense they brought before stepping back, his whole clan managed to avoid any fatalities but he was here for his friends. Shikamaru and Naruto both offered their flowers at the same time, both solemnly scanning the names, their hearts heavier with every one they read. Shikamaru stepped back and lit a cigarette, finding it too troublesome to get emotional now and decided to content himself at looking towards the clear sky, no clouds in sight.
Naruto remained. His eyes stopped once they reached one name.
Hyuuga Neji.
The amount of gratitude and respect that swelled within him when he read his name was immeasurable. He had given his life for him, and if not for his sacrifice, it would be Naruto's own name carved on that stone.
A breath hitched in his throat. There was someone else he was grateful to, someone he really wanted to see, now that everything had calmed down. No, he needed to see her.
Sakura and Ino had left to the hospital, it needed all available medics to help with all the wounded veterans of the most recent war.
Naruto: Hey, where are the others?
Shikamaru: Don't know for sure, I'm headed to Kurenai-sensei's, if you wanna come with and check with her.
Naruto: Yeah, sure, let's go! *bolts quickly out of sight towards some random location*
Shikamaru: Uggh... me and my big mouth.
Chouji: Hehe, take care Shika, I've got family things to attend to so I'll see you 'round.
When Naruto came back after getting lost, Naruto and Shikamaru walked towards Kurenai's home. The villagers waved at them and Naruto greeted them warmly in turn, but Shikamaru noticed something odd about Naruto... well, something odder.
Shikamaru: *long drawn out sigh* Alright, what's up?
Naruto: Huh, whaddya mean?
Shikamaru: You're not acting like yourself.
Naruto: Baa-chan's orders. *chuckles at his own in-joke*
Shikamaru: *Stares*
Naruto: *sigh* Look, it's nothing, it's just... everything isn't like I expected it to be.
Shikamaru: *raises eyebrow*
Naruto: I thought I'd be happier, you know, with all this attention. I've wanted it for so long, to be seen as a hero, as someone who people can count on every time. With the war, I proved that what happened with Pain wasn't just a fluke. People all over the world respect me now. Don't get me wrong, I am happy, it's just that, so many people died because they believed in me... life is a lot more complicated than I thought it would be.
Shikamaru: *nods* There's no use in complaining. If you want to be happy then be happy. Life is only as complicated as you make it.
Naruto: *dubious* Huh? Be happy. Just like that?
Shikamaru: Just like that.
Shino: Shikamaru is right Naruto. Why is that? Because you can't keep focusing on what has been lost, you have to focus on what you still have.
Naruto: Gah! Shino when did you get here!?
Shino: *fixes glasses* I have only just arrived.
Kiba: Hah! Are you sure you can be Hokage Naruto? You can't even recognize what's right under your nose. *flicks Naruto's nose* What if we were assassins, huh? You should leave the hat for those who can handle the pressure. *smirks*
Naruto:*smirks* I hope your not talking about yourself, Kiba, a good nose isn't everything.
Kiba: Oh yeah? I bet you my nose can get me to the Hokage seat before you.
Naruto: *unimpressed* I beat your nose with a fart.
Kiba:*tenses up with anger, indignation but ultimately deflates into comical depression* ...Touche.
Shikamaru: That went better than I thought it would.
Shino: I can't believe he accepted defeat so easily. Why? He wouldn't shut up about wanting a rematch with Naruto for years.
Kiba: That's right! How 'bout it Naruto? Winner gets to be Hokage first!
Kurenai: It's not about getting to your destination first, it's about knowing how to get there and enjoying the journey.
Kiba: That sounds lame sensei.
Kurenai: *shakes her head at Kiba's antics*... Naruto, you're back so soon?
Naruto: *distracted* Uh... Oh... yeah, I... um... just got back.
Naruto stood staring at the person next to Kurenai-sensei. She was holding Kurenai's baby, her head bent down over the bundle in her arms, her eyes looking down on the child with such love and tenderness it seemed surreal. Naruto was transfixed at the sight. He had wanted to see her, to confirm something for himself, and the way he stood there like an idiot with sweaty palms, fluttering heartbeat and a slight tingling sensation in his stomach pretty much verified his suspicions.
She slowly, or so it seemed to him, tilted her head upright, still looking down on the child in her arms. Naruto could see her lips turned upwards in a placid smile, it had a strange hypnotic effect on him. It was her eyes, though, that did it for him. When their eyes met, Naruto's heart seemed to fill with encountered emotions and it was then that he heard her voice fill his senses.
Hinata: Okaerinasai(Welcome home), Naruto-kun. *smiles wider*
Suddenly, a calmness overcame his senses. Naruto felt like everything that had been troubling him had suddenly vanished and his whole life finally clicked into place. He had finally arrived to a place he didn't even know he was traveling towards, but he didn't regret the journey. He was finally where he wanted to be.
Naruto: *smiles, slowly growing wider* Tadaima.(I'm home.)
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Re: Possible NaruHina Scenarios
by SenpaiSamaSan Fri Aug 09, 2013 2:44 pm
@Aelita
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
I haven't written a fanfic before, maybe I'll try my hand at it, it's really encouraging to see people enjoy what I write, even if it is a short little NH scenario. :P
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
I haven't written a fanfic before, maybe I'll try my hand at it, it's really encouraging to see people enjoy what I write, even if it is a short little NH scenario. :P
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Re: Possible NaruHina Scenarios
by GreatKungLao Fri Aug 09, 2013 6:13 pm
I was just googling and here what I found:
This would be amazing to happen. Naruto kissing Hinata at the same place, where he was standing, when returned to the village and everybody around celebrating for NaruHina.
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This would be amazing to happen. Naruto kissing Hinata at the same place, where he was standing, when returned to the village and everybody around celebrating for NaruHina.
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Re: Possible NaruHina Scenarios
by lily567 Fri Aug 09, 2013 6:29 pm
@greatkunglaoGreatKungLao wrote:I was just googling and here what I found:
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This would be amazing to happen. Naruto kissing Hinata at the same place, where he was standing, when returned to the village and everybody around celebrating for NaruHina.
I can't see what is in the spoilers
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Re: Possible NaruHina Scenarios
by GreatKungLao Fri Aug 09, 2013 6:37 pm
http://stat.ameba.jp/user_images/20130207/18/yuhtodoroki/96/f0/j/o0600043612409425845.jpglily567 wrote:@greatkunglaoGreatKungLao wrote:I was just googling and here what I found:
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This would be amazing to happen. Naruto kissing Hinata at the same place, where he was standing, when returned to the village and everybody around celebrating for NaruHina.
I can't see what is in the spoilers
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Re: Possible NaruHina Scenarios
by Mustang Mon Aug 12, 2013 12:13 am
Alright here is the other one that seems like a possibility in my opinion.
this one is set after the war, (well moments after)
this one is set after the war, (well moments after)
- another NH moment:
- Naruto is standing in front of his fading father, he begins to tear up knowing that it would be the last time he sees him alive, Minato places his only hand his head and smiles proudly at his son.
Minato: Son I am proud of you, now go and get that pink haired ninja.
Naruto: Sorry dad, you're wrong Sakura-chan isn't my girlfriend, nor will she ever be my girlfriend she already chose someone else.
Minato: Be sure to find one that makes you happy and loves you son, just like how I found Kushina.
Naruto: Dad, before you go I want you to meet some, who does love me. (Naruto runs off to find Hinata)
Hinata: Naruto-Kun?
Naruto: Don't say a word come with me, (grabs Hinata's hand and brings her to his father) Dad, this is Hinata, she has saved my life on more than one occasion
Minato: (looks at the Hyuuga as she begins to blush after hearing Naruto's praise, she grasps Naruto's hand causing the yellow flash to smile proudly) make sure my son becomes hokage, just like how his mother made me become hokage.
Hinata: Lord fourth, thank you (Hinata bows to the fading hokage,) I will make sure Naruto is happy and that he does follow his dreams.
Minato: Good, now I can meet with Kushina and tell her that Naruto has found himself a good woman, one that will stay by his side forever. (Minato leaves while Naruto watches with Hinata by is side.)
Naruto: (Starts blushing while thinking about everything he has been through) Thank you Hinata, you stopped me from giving up again, I guess I owe you a lot more than just a thanks.
Hinata: (looks at Naruto and smiles at him, she takes her left hand and places it on his face) No thanks are required, I just want one thing Naruto-Kun. just one thing is all I desire.
Naruto: (remembers Hinata's confession and starts to cry with happiness) I have never been good with this sort of stuff, I don't know what to say, this is the first time I have been so nervous like this in my life and I don't know why
Hinata: It's fine Naruto-Kun, I can tell be looking into your eyes, my dream is to become the wife of the next hokage.
Naruto: (moves in closer and embraces Hinata) thank you Hinata for helping me meet my parents, thank you for showing me what love is and thank you for saving my life, and thank you for being here for me, (Naruto, moves back and looks Hinata in the eyes, he smiles gently and moves in)
panel gets cut off but it is implied that they kiss while the alliance celebrate the victory against Juubito and Madara.
Naruto: Hinata, I............ I love you. (Hinata smiles as joy overcomes her she hugs Naruto again ignoring everything that is going on around her)
Hinata: (tears rolling down her face) I will stay by your side forever Naruto-Kun.
Naruto: and I will be honoured to have you by my side forever.
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Re: Possible NaruHina Scenarios
by Irielo Mon Aug 12, 2013 12:20 am
This one is sweet too. Very sweet. I like this perspective of Minato meeting Hinata. That would clear up things too.51-mustang wrote:Alright here is the other one that seems like a possibility in my opinion.
this one is set after the war, (well moments after)
- another NH moment:
Minato: Son I am proud of you, now go and get that pink haired ninja.
Naruto: Sorry dad, you're wrong Sakura-chan isn't my girlfriend, nor will she ever be my girlfriend she already chose someone else.
Minato: Be sure to find one that makes you happy and loves you son, just like how I found Kushina.
Naruto: Dad, before you go I want you to meet some, who does love me. (Naruto runs off to find Hinata)
Hinata: Naruto-Kun?
Naruto: Don't say a word come with me, (grabs Hinata's hand and brings her to his father) Dad, this is Hinata, she has saved my life on more than one occasion
Minato: (looks at the Hyuuga as she begins to blush after hearing Naruto's praise, she grasps Naruto's hand causing the yellow flash to smile proudly) make sure my son becomes hokage, just like how his mother made me become hokage.
Hinata: Lord fourth, thank you (Hinata bows to the fading hokage,) I will make sure Naruto is happy and that he does follow his dreams.
Minato: Good, now I can meet with Kushina and tell her that Naruto has found himself a good woman, one that will stay by his side forever. (Minato leaves while Naruto watches with Hinata by is side.)
Naruto: (Starts blushing while thinking about everything he has been through) Thank you Hinata, you stopped me from giving up again, I guess I owe you a lot more than just a thanks.
Hinata: (looks at Naruto and smiles at him, she takes her left hand and places it on his face) No thanks are required, I just want one thing Naruto-Kun. just one thing is all I desire.
Naruto: (remembers Hinata's confession and starts to cry with happiness) I have never been good with this sort of stuff, I don't know what to say, this is the first time I have been so nervous like this in my life and I don't know why
Hinata: It's fine Naruto-Kun, I can tell be looking into your eyes, my dream is to become the wife of the next hokage.
Naruto: (moves in closer and embraces Hinata) thank you Hinata for helping me meet my parents, thank you for showing me what love is and thank you for saving my life, and thank you for being here for me, (Naruto, moves back and looks Hinata in the eyes, he smiles gently and moves in)
panel gets cut off but it is implied that they kiss while the alliance celebrate the victory against Juubito and Madara.
Naruto: Hinata, I............ I love you. (Hinata smiles as joy overcomes her she hugs Naruto again ignoring everything that is going on around her)
Hinata: (tears rolling down her face) I will stay by your side forever Naruto-Kun.
Naruto: and I will be honoured to have you by my side forever.
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Re: Possible NaruHina Scenarios
by Mustang Mon Aug 12, 2013 1:15 am
and here is the last one (well almost, I might have another one if I feel like it) which I think we will all like.
- at the training grounds:
- Naruto is standing in his old training grounds getting ready to sit down to think about how he has come this far, he remembers the first days of Team 7 and wonders where the next road will take him.
Naruto: it has been a long time, I started out really bad, not even my clone jutsus were any good
Naruto looks into the water to see a reflection of his early training days with Sasuke, Sakura and Kakashi, all the times they had failed to get the bells but they didn't stop trying, Naruto laughs at himself for getting tied up and getting fed by Sakura (well that was what I wanted I guess, but then) he reflects on Hinata cheering him up calling him a proud failure (but then there was Hinata, it was like she knew what I needed to know) Naruto hears footsteps coming from behind, he quickly turns around to see Hinata walking towards the water front.
Hinata: Naruto-Kun, why are you here?
Naruto: Just reflecting on everything that has happened, remembering Neji and the people who brought me here.
Hinata: so Naruto-Kun can I sit next to you?
Naruto: of course (Naruto moves aside to allow Hinata to sit next to him) I was thinking about everything, my friends and enemies, they have all brought me to this time and place.
Hinata: that's great to hear Naruto-Kun.
Naruto: Yeah, but now I am in the middle of remembering the most important person in my life.
Hinata: Oh that's great, who is it?
Naruto: one that cheered me up while I was down, if it wasn't for her I wouldn't be here now.
Hinata: That's great Naruto-Kun she must be a really great person, I was always the one who needed your help. (Naruto places his hand over hers and smiles at her)
Naruto: No you're not the one who needed help you're stong, you proved how weak I was even with all that power I had, I was still nothing compared to you, when it was you who helped me out, when Neji died I almost gave up, but your strength and confidence, it was those things about you that saved me.
Hinata: Am I that important to you Naruto-Kun?
Naruto: (reflects on her confession then remembers holding her hand) yes, you saved my life and I was able to get this far because of you
Hinata: because of me?
Naruto: (looks up to the sky as the clouds continue to move overhead,) Yeah, it's thanks to you I was able to move forward, (Naruto stands up and turns around, he puts his hand out towards Hinata) I want you by my side
Hinata: (gulps and slowly moves her hand towards his, she grabs it and holds on while she gets up,) I always promised myself that I would be the one to walk with you forever.
Naruto: I was able to be myself around you.
Hinata: I know Naruto-Kun, I can see it in your eyes.
Naruto: (he smiles as he begins to blush) 'she understands me better then even me, I guess she would be the one to help me make my dream come true,' (starts walking while holding Hinata's hand, they walk away from the water front and towards the village,) Hinata, I need you with me to help me make my dreams come true, you are the only one that can do that.
Hinata: Yes Naruto-Kun, I will help you reach your goal as Hokage and to be the greatest Hokage ever.
Naruto: Thank You Hinata, with you by my side I can achieve anything.
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Re: Possible NaruHina Scenarios
by Guest Wed Aug 14, 2013 7:07 am
(After war is over, everything in konaha is back to normal) (Naruto sees Hinata)
Naruto:Hey Hinata, would you u-um want to go on a date?
Hinata: (fan girl moment in head) Shure I'd love to Naruto.
Naruto: So then, how's Ichirakus?
Hinata: Actually I have a different idea, i-if its ok with you naruto-Kun.
Naruto: (confused) Ok? sure then.
(Naruto follows Hinata through town and ends up at an ice cream place)
(Hinata buys a double Popsicle for them to share and hands half to Naruto while blushing)
( Naruto waits a moment before breaking out in tears, giving Hinata a hug)
Hinata: N-Naruto? Is there something wrong?
Naruto: N-No Hinata. It's just seems as if this is the 3rd time.
Hinata: T-The 3rd time what?
Naruto: It seems as if this is the 3rd time, that one of these popsicles is shared with someone that I love.
Naruto:Hey Hinata, would you u-um want to go on a date?
Hinata: (fan girl moment in head) Shure I'd love to Naruto.
Naruto: So then, how's Ichirakus?
Hinata: Actually I have a different idea, i-if its ok with you naruto-Kun.
Naruto: (confused) Ok? sure then.
(Naruto follows Hinata through town and ends up at an ice cream place)
(Hinata buys a double Popsicle for them to share and hands half to Naruto while blushing)
( Naruto waits a moment before breaking out in tears, giving Hinata a hug)
Hinata: N-Naruto? Is there something wrong?
Naruto: N-No Hinata. It's just seems as if this is the 3rd time.
Hinata: T-The 3rd time what?
Naruto: It seems as if this is the 3rd time, that one of these popsicles is shared with someone that I love.
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Re: Possible NaruHina Scenarios
by lily567 Wed Aug 14, 2013 7:12 am
this is pretty goodLC Nuke wrote:(After war is over, everything in konaha is back to normal) (Naruto sees Hinata)
Naruto:Hey Hinata, would you u-um want to go on a date?
Hinata: (fan girl moment in head) Shure I'd love to Naruto.
Naruto: So then, how's Ichirakus?
Hinata: Actually I have a different idea, i-if its ok with you naruto-Kun.
Naruto: (confused) Ok? sure then.
(Naruto follows Hinata through town and ends up at an ice cream place)
(Hinata buys a double Popsicle for them to share and hands half to Naruto while blushing)
( Naruto waits a moment before breaking out in tears, giving Hinata a hug)
Hinata: N-Naruto? Is there something wrong?
Naruto: N-No Hinata. It's just seems as if this is the 3rd time.
Hinata: T-The 3rd time what?
Naruto: It seems as if this is the 3rd time, that one of these popsicles is shared with someone that I love.
the first was iruka then ero-sennin and now hinata
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Re: Possible NaruHina Scenarios
by Ponyta Wed Aug 14, 2013 5:14 pm
I love it! I could totally see something like this happening! Or maybe something along the lines of after the war Hinata is taking a break on a bench. She hasn't really had a proper chance to talk to Naruto after everything that happened when he spots her from a distance. He notices the expression on her face and uses the Popsicle sort of like an ice breaker. It's beautiful in my head.
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Re: Possible NaruHina Scenarios
by GreatKungLao Fri Aug 16, 2013 10:39 am
Minato communicated with Naruto's Kurama.
Kurama: Yo, Minato! You know, since you don't know your son as long as I do, I wanted to clear one your mistake, that you did when came to the battlefield.
Minato/Naruto: ???
Kurama: *smiles* Naruto's girlfriend is not pink haired medical kunoichi. It is actually Hinata Hyuuga. You can't even imagine how much I facepalmed myself everytime, when Hinata was trying to make her move to Naruto and he didn't even noticed it until she confessed her feelings right in his face. Even back then, when I was so full of hatred felt sorry for poor girl.
Naruto: *blushes* It was I who supposed to tell about it to my dad, dattebayo! Besides, how could I even understand Hinata back them if I myself was rised without any knowledge what love is? But now I'm so happy to know what it is and that Hinata is by my side... And I want her by my side forever. I wish my mom met her...
Minato: *surprised* Well... I'm absolutely didn't expected that coming. Don't worry Naruto, I'm sure that Kushina would be full of happiness, that there is a girl that you could talk like that about. While I'm here, I would gladly meet Hinata, I want to get know a girl, who made my son such a romantic.
Kurama: And I was expecting it to come straight from his mouth for 643 chapters. I'm so tired so that I have to open all cards right away.
Kurama: Yo, Minato! You know, since you don't know your son as long as I do, I wanted to clear one your mistake, that you did when came to the battlefield.
Minato/Naruto: ???
Kurama: *smiles* Naruto's girlfriend is not pink haired medical kunoichi. It is actually Hinata Hyuuga. You can't even imagine how much I facepalmed myself everytime, when Hinata was trying to make her move to Naruto and he didn't even noticed it until she confessed her feelings right in his face. Even back then, when I was so full of hatred felt sorry for poor girl.
Naruto: *blushes* It was I who supposed to tell about it to my dad, dattebayo! Besides, how could I even understand Hinata back them if I myself was rised without any knowledge what love is? But now I'm so happy to know what it is and that Hinata is by my side... And I want her by my side forever. I wish my mom met her...
Minato: *surprised* Well... I'm absolutely didn't expected that coming. Don't worry Naruto, I'm sure that Kushina would be full of happiness, that there is a girl that you could talk like that about. While I'm here, I would gladly meet Hinata, I want to get know a girl, who made my son such a romantic.
Kurama: And I was expecting it to come straight from his mouth for 643 chapters. I'm so tired so that I have to open all cards right away.
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Re: Possible NaruHina Scenarios
by JulaShona Fri Aug 16, 2013 11:26 am
@GreatKungLao, funny scenario. Kurama is nasty and I would expect of something like that from him.
But... IMO, I wouldn't want a third "person" to push NaruHina. It would be funny yeah, but... no. I wouldn't like that. I want them to come together on their own without anyone to interfere.
But... IMO, I wouldn't want a third "person" to push NaruHina. It would be funny yeah, but... no. I wouldn't like that. I want them to come together on their own without anyone to interfere.
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Re: Possible NaruHina Scenarios
by Mustang Sun Aug 18, 2013 6:26 pm
Well that is an interesting development, a really good one to have me make another scenario.
hope you all liked this one, wasn't as good as my previous ones but it is still really sweet.
- happy birthday Naruto:
- Naruto: We won, at last this is all over.
Hinata: (leaps to Naruto's side and stands side by side with him) *finally this fight is over*
Minato: (sees Hinata standing by his sons side and smile) I see, so it seems he has someone, Kushina I think our son will be happy, (watches Naruto and Hinata holding hands) so Naruto does have a girlfriend.
Naruto and Hinata turn around to see Minato standing with a smile, starting to fade away, he raises his fist ready for one more fist bump.
Naruto: (bumps fist with his father one more time) dad, I want you to meet Hinata.
Minato: Stay by my son's side, (smiles gently at his son and Hinata)
Hinata: Yes lord fourth, I will look after him always and make his dream come true. (Minato disappears with a smile on his face)
the next Day Naruto is walking through the village, to find that no one was there, everything was quiet even Ichiraku Raman.
Naruto: oh man today is my birthday.
Hinata: Naruto-Kun. (Hinata walks up to him and follows him around the village)
they stop to see the Hokage monument, they stand quietly as they scan the monument, they stop at Naruto's father remembering the day before (stay by my son's side)
Naruto: (holds Hinata's hand and smiles at her) I need you to help me become Hokage.
Hinata: Yes Naruto-Kun.
Naruto and Hinata walk around the village some more.
Hinata: (stops while holding Naruto's hand) Happy Birthday Naruto-Kun
Naruto: (turns around in shock to hear Hinata wishing him a happy birthday) Thank you Hinata.
Hinata moves closer and hugs him, Naruto returns the hug, not realising the group approaching them talking about Naruto's surprise birthday party, Sakura looks ahead and begins to smile (about damn time) the group hides and watches Naruto and Hinata sharing their first kiss together, (hell yeah!)
Naruto: *wow so this is what a kiss from a girl is like,*
Naruto: (after Hinata pulls back and smiles at him) best Birthday present ever.
Hinata: I am glad you liked it Naruto-Kun.
hope you all liked this one, wasn't as good as my previous ones but it is still really sweet.
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Re: Possible NaruHina Scenarios
by GreatKungLao Sun Aug 18, 2013 6:46 pm
This one will be short, but I guess this could easily come as NH confirmation.
Naruto: Dad, he mentioned some girl... Rin. Who was that?
Minato: ... She was one of my students, alongside with Kakashi and Obito... Obito dreamed about becoming Hokage and he loved Rin very much...
Obito: What is the point of talking about that now? RIN IS DEAD!!! You supposed to take care of your students... But you didn't saved not Rin nor me... She had the whole life ahead... She didn't suppose to die that day... Naruto, do you even know what it feels like to loose a girl that you love with all your heart?
Naruto: *having flashback of Pain "killing" Hinata and how it leads him to transform into 6-9 tails* ... So it was that feeling, that lead you this way... Now I understand... Obito, we do really share a lot in common. I guess we could even become best friends if we have met under different circumstances. It's not too late! Stop this madness! Help us to defeat Madara!
Obito: How could you possibly understand me? Your precious Hinata is alive, but Rin is dead...
Naruto: I do understand, that it's nearly impossible to live in the world, when you loose someone precious... But if you stop care memories about them, if their will would stop living in the hearts of others and if you wouldn't let others around you to help continue your life, then it will be the real way to kill the ones you cared about. Obito, I saw right in front of my eyes how Hinata was almost killed by Pain and it really made me mad, so mad that I was ready to turn into a monster... If it wasn't for my dad, I would possibly become like you, just like you said before... Let us help you, Obito! You don't do justice for Rin acting like that! What would she say if she saw your current situation?
Orochimaru appears on the battlefield with Edo Tensei Rin:
Rin: OBITO!!! PLEASE STOP!!!
Obito: O_O
Naruto: Dad, he mentioned some girl... Rin. Who was that?
Minato: ... She was one of my students, alongside with Kakashi and Obito... Obito dreamed about becoming Hokage and he loved Rin very much...
Obito: What is the point of talking about that now? RIN IS DEAD!!! You supposed to take care of your students... But you didn't saved not Rin nor me... She had the whole life ahead... She didn't suppose to die that day... Naruto, do you even know what it feels like to loose a girl that you love with all your heart?
Naruto: *having flashback of Pain "killing" Hinata and how it leads him to transform into 6-9 tails* ... So it was that feeling, that lead you this way... Now I understand... Obito, we do really share a lot in common. I guess we could even become best friends if we have met under different circumstances. It's not too late! Stop this madness! Help us to defeat Madara!
Obito: How could you possibly understand me? Your precious Hinata is alive, but Rin is dead...
Naruto: I do understand, that it's nearly impossible to live in the world, when you loose someone precious... But if you stop care memories about them, if their will would stop living in the hearts of others and if you wouldn't let others around you to help continue your life, then it will be the real way to kill the ones you cared about. Obito, I saw right in front of my eyes how Hinata was almost killed by Pain and it really made me mad, so mad that I was ready to turn into a monster... If it wasn't for my dad, I would possibly become like you, just like you said before... Let us help you, Obito! You don't do justice for Rin acting like that! What would she say if she saw your current situation?
Orochimaru appears on the battlefield with Edo Tensei Rin:
Rin: OBITO!!! PLEASE STOP!!!
Obito: O_O
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Re: Possible NaruHina Scenarios
by Guest Mon Aug 19, 2013 6:56 pm
Wow reading back over these different scenarios, we have members that would make great fanfictions lol.
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Re: Possible NaruHina Scenarios
by Zora Mon Aug 19, 2013 7:32 pm
Hey CC (•‿•)
My NaruHina feels are taking over my body.
My NaruHina feels are taking over my body.
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Re: Possible NaruHina Scenarios
by racefan1992 Thu Aug 22, 2013 9:42 am
51-Mustang gets credit for doing this before me, back in like the first pages of this thread. But this my 3rd and last one. More feels and Naruto/Kurama shangians and a metaphor.
Not complete. But fixed.
Long post as well so. Enjoy.
- Spoiler:
*Everyone cheers* Yeah, we won!!!!!!!!!!! *more cheers*
Hinata: *exhausted sigh* We did it, we won........ (kneeles down gently)
Kiba: You ok Hinata?
HInata: I'm just tired Kiba-kun.
Kiba: I'll try and find a Medic for you. *runs off*
Hinata: Wait!......... you don't really have too............
*Hinata feels a rush of air beside her*
Naruto: Are you ok Hinata? *concerned look*
Hinata: I'm..........i'm ok Naruto-kun. Just tired, i've never given that much effort before for such a long time.
Naruto: (She is right, i can sense it. Hinata has given everything she has...........)
Hinata: Kiba-kun went to find a medic.....
Naruto: *looks around* I don't see any, he'll take some time i guess.
Hinata: *Wipes away sweat from her face*
Naruto: (Hinata really is wiped out...................*thinks*.........I got an idea, Hey, Kurama!)
Kurama: (Hm? What do you want?)
Naruto: (Got any chakra left?)
Kurama: (Yeah, some. Why?)
Naruto: (Can i use it?)
Kurama: (It isn't much for you too use but go ahead and use it. Be careful tho, you don't have much left either.)
Naruto: (I'll be careful Kurama *joyious smile*)
Kurama: (Why is he so happy?)
Naruto: I'll help you Hinata.
Hinata: Your not a medic tho, Naruto-kun.
Naruto: So?
Hinata: ...............
Naruto: *grabs her hand and transforms*
Hinata: !!!!!! *starts feeling her strength returning* Naruto-kun, you don't really have too do this......
Naruto: Your right, i don't have too.......I want too.
HInata: ?
Naruto: Because you've done the same for me, many times Hinata.
Hinata: Naruto-kun?
*They stand up*
Minato: Son? *starts walking toward them*
Kurama: (You know you could have told me what your were going to do Naruto)
Naruto: (Sorry, i guess i wasn't thinking about you and me, only her well being.)
Kurama: (Well, just be straight with me next time. I'm fine with what your doing)
*Minato appears*
Naruto: Dad?
Hinata: Lord 4th?
Minato: You ok Son?
Naruto: *nods*
Minato: What about her?
Hinata: I'm...........i'm ok now. *starts blushing*
Minato: Well good.....*sees Naruto holding her hand* Is she your girlfriend?
Hinata: *looks away embrassed*
Naruto: *looks at Hinata then back at his dad* She is more too me then just that.
Minato/Hinata: Huh?
Naruto: Hinata has a strength that is greater then my own.
Hinata: Naruto-kun?
Minato: Son?
Naruto: It isn't a strength that comes from charkra or muscles, it comes from within Hinatas heart and soul.
Hinata: *looks down* (Naruto-kun)
Naruto: Hinata has given me so much. Strength, courage, determination but most importantly..........
Minato: ?
Naruto: An understanding of what love is. For the longest time, i didn't know what that felt like *looks at Hinata* but now i do. There have been times in my life when i needed support, i have friends who have been there for me, Hinata was there when i needed her most.
Minato: *listening entently* (I see......)
Naruto: There was a time when i was very depressed and unconfident about myself. I had alot of pressure on me *flashes back to the blood vow*. I didn't know if i could handle that pressure but Hinata told me how strong i was because i always had the strength to pick myself back up because "i think that is what true strength is." She thought i was incredible because of that. But in reality dad, Hinata is the incredible one.
Hinata: *starts crying* (N.......Naruto-kun)
Naruto: I first got to understand Hinata when she fought her cousin. Even tho she had no chance of beating him and he tried to break her spirite *flashes back to Nejis mental torture*. But, Hinata didn't give up. He knocked her down again and again. But Hinata got back to her feet. Neji was going to kill her but Hinata stood her ground.
Minato: Why?
Naruto: Because she wanted to change herself.
Minato: Huh?
Naruto: Hinata wanted too change because she wanted to be like me. *flashes back to Sakura and Lee telling him how similar they are*. Hinata was willing to die, just to change herself. Well *looks at Hinata*, i'd say she changed herself.........for the better. After that day, not only has Hinata has grown stronger and more confident as a ninja.................but as a person.
Hinata: *still crying but hiding it*
Naruto: And i met the real Hinata that day but i've seen that person many times afterword.
Minato: *still listening entily*
Naruto: A powerful enemy attacked our village, looking for me. Wanting to take me away. He destoried everything and killed alot of people. I told everyone to stay back because i was the only one who could defeat him. I did well against him but i was eventually pinned down. I was about too be taken away...... when Hinata stepped in to protect me. I told her to leave because i knew she had no chance of winning *flashes back to her protecting him* She stayied were she was and told that she knew she had no chance of winning but she wasn't going to leave me. And she told me why she was doing what she was doing........
Minato: ?
Naruto: Because i saved her.
Minato: Saved her? How?
Naruto: My smile, my postive attitude saved her from going down the wrong path. She told me that she always used to cry and give up because things were very difficult for her but when she looked at me, she felt full of courage and strength. It helped her keep going forward. But most importantly dad.........
Minato: ?
Naruto: *squeezes Hinatas hand* It because she loves me.
Minato: !?.....she.......she loves you?
Naruto: *nods* Yes, Hinata loves me. And that day she was willing to give all her strength.......and her life to protect me.
Minato: *flashes back to when he and Kushina protected Naruto as a baby from Kurama* (my........goodness..........*looks at Hinata*......this girl..........)
Naruto: That day......i'll never forget what she did for me. That day, i came to understand Hinata the person fully. I came to understand who she really was................. Hinata IS like me. What she did for me that day, was the biggest display of courage and strength i've ever seen anyone do. So, no Dad. Hinata isn't just my girlfriend, she is my courage, she is my strength, she is my inspiration and *smilies* she is me, minus some of qualities i got from mom.
Hinata: *still crying and hiding her tears*
Minato: *smilies* I see son, she is incredible. (wow, you'd never know it just by looking at her). And yes son, you do have some of your mothers qualities. But i see that Hinata has something me and Kushina share.
Naruto: Huh?
Minato: We love you, son. We always have and we always will love you. But what Hinata has isn't a parental love, it's a pure love. Unselfish love. From what you have told me of her, she is very unselfish and cares much about you and your well being.
Naruto: Oh.....ok, dad. I get it now. *laughs* Yes, Hinata is very unselfish. She has always been very nice too me. Although i do feel dumb for not noticing her feelings sooner. *sad face*
Minato: Well son, you know now don't you?
Naruto: Yeah, yeah i do. *smilies*
Minato: Then i have a question for you son?
Naruto: Huh? What?
Minato: Are you happy with her by yourside?
Naruto: Yes dad. *looks at Hinata* i am happy with her *looks back to Minato* by my side. I feel joy and happiness with her by me. I'm over joyied to have met someone like Hinata in my life. My admiration for her is limitless........
Minato: Then that is all i need know son. I'm sure you know that my time here is limited but now i can return to Kushina knowing that our son is happy, very happy.
Naruto: And healthy, don't forget healthy. Mom would bring that up.
Minato: *laughs* yes, she would bring that up.
*cue father/son laugh*
Minato: But seriously son, i do know that Kushina would happy know that our son is loved by someone who loves him truthfully and honestly, with all her heart for who you are. I know i'm happy son. *big smile*
Naruto: *starts crying* I know you and mom are happy for me and i'm glad too be your son.
Minato: And me and Kushina are glad we have you as a son. I can return to her knowing that our son is well taken care off and loved deeply.
Naruto: *wipes away tears* Your leaving now?
Minato: No son, i still have alittle time left here, so i'll help out with the wounded. I"m not a medical ninja but i can help out in some way.
Naruto: Oh, ok dad.
Minato: Don't worry son, i'll say goodbye, since i couldn't do it properly last time. Besides *looks at Hinata* i think you and Hinata deserve some alone time together before we all head back to our respective villiages. You may not have much time to talk and interact afterword, so just some fatherly advice "do it while you can." *smilies*
Naruto: *smilies back* Ok dad.
Minato: I'll leave you two be then. *turns around and leaves*. (Wow, Hinata is incredible. When i think of it, she kinda reminds of Kushina in someways and.............she reminds me of myself as well. I also see Naruto in her. I can tell Naruto has effected alot of people in his life but none more so then Hinata it seems. *looks back* I"m glad he found the happiness he deserves too have. I do feel guilty about leaving him to fend for himself at such a young age but............ I'm glad he found friends and someone who loves him very much)
Fodder ninja: Lord 4th over here, we could use some help!
Minato: Ok, i'm coming!
*runs*
Kurama: (wow, that was touching.)
Naruto: (are you being a smart ass?)
Kurama: (Nope, i'm serious. I never really thought you'd say such things.)
Naruto: (well, Hinata brings out of me i guess)
Kurama: (come on *nudge,nudge* you do have a soft spot for her)
Naruto: (*blushing* Quit teasing me while ya?)
Kurama: (Nope, i'm having too much fun. But seriously i've felt things in your heart when something happens to her. There is big place in your heart for her.)
Naruto: (*scratching the back of his head and blushing* I.....i guess so.)
Kurama: (don't play that game with me, YOU DO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
Naruto: (Ugh.)
Kurama: (Is it really so hard to admit it? Your mom didn't have a problem with saying such things. I felt what she felt and i feel what you feel.)
Naruto: (*red faced with embrassment* She.............she does mean alot too me)
Kurama: (i know you didn't say out loud from your pie hole but tell her yourself. I'm willing to bet your dad figured it out even without you saying it)
Naruto: (oh......ok.)
Kurama: (good boy)
Naruto: Say........Hinata...............i...uh...........Huh? *sees her crying* Hey, whats the matter?
Hinata: *trying not to break down* I......n.....no ones ever.....given me......s-such praise........before. *sniff* Not even.....my own father. *sniff*
Naruto: (He has never given her praise? What the hell........)
Hinata: Hearing...........those....words.....coming from you......Naruto-kun. They.......they mean so such too me. I just....... *sniff* don't know....what to say...*sniff/wipes away tears*
Naruto: *softly smiles and hugs her* You don't have to say anything Hinata.
Hinata: *breaks down*
Naruto: You deserve such praise Hinata. For all you've been through, you've come out of it a better ninja and person. *flashes back too all the momenst he and Hinata have had*. You ARE incredible, i can say that with confidence because it is true. Where you are from when i first met you to where you are now, it isn't even funny. You've grown stronger over that time, i see it. Not just your physical strength but your inner strength as well. You shocked me by how you fought Neji. You weren't even in his league but you still gave everything you had, almost your life. I may have cheered you on but you still proven me wrong.
Hinata: *crying............ 'huh?'*
Naruto: My first opinion of you was wrong, so wrong. I kinda feel bad for how i viewed you. But i'm happy to admit that i was wrong about you. But you further showed me how wrong i was for what you did against Pain. *flashes back* What i said before about what you did is true.....THAT was the biggest display of courage and strength i've seen ANYONE do. You knew you might not see me again and spoke from heart about how you felt about me. You gave everything for me....everything, including your life. You didn't have to do that......
Hinata: *crying........'i wanted to protect you'..........*
Naruto: I know....... you told me why you wanted to protect me............ and i have nothing but admiration for what you did. Because of what you did, i was able to met my mom and dad. They told me of what they did for me when i was young. I got too know what a parents love felt like. But what you did for me, i got too know what YOUR love felt like. Of course i was shocked by what you said but after i had sometime to think about it............. i know where my feelings are.
*Naruto caresses Hinatas face and wipes away her tears*
Naruto: I........i love you Hinata.
Hinata: Hhhhhuh?
Naruto: I love you. At first didn't understand what love meant but now i know what love means....you helped me come to that conclusion.
Kurama: (Huh? *senses something* What is this.....this.....feeling?)
Hinata: I........i did?
Naruto: Yes, you showed me that love always gives, it never wants. You have been very patient with me and waited for me. You let me figure things out and never pushed me for an answer. You were always by my side even when i didn't think very much of you, you were there next too me.......... cheering and supporting me.
Hinata: *graps his hands* Naruto-kun?
Naruto: Hinata, you hold.............. a large place in my heart. The more i've thougth about what you've done for me, that bigger it has gotten. I've done alot of things by myself... but there are things that i can't do alone.........
Hinata: I'll help you with those things Naruto-kun.
Naruto: Thank you Hinata. But i know there is one thing you can help me with......
Hinata: What?
Naruto: I love you but i've never had a kiss before so....
Hinata: You don't have to say anymore Naruto-kun..........
*they kiss*
Kurama: (Holy................. where the hell is this coming from!?)
*a shroud of chakra starts surrounding Naruto and Hinata*
Kiba: Hey, Hinata i found you a.......huh?
Minato: *senses something and looks in Narutos direction* Son?
Everyone else: *looks in Naruto and Hinatas direction*
Kurama: (Naruto? Are you creating this.......or is she doing it? no........it's........)
*the shroud continues to grow in size and intensity around them*
Kiba: Hey, what the hell is going on here?
Minato: I'm.......i'm not sure *puzzled*.
Kiba: we have too help them!
Hiashi: No wait!
Kiba: What do you mean wait?
Hiashi: i can see what is going on.............
Minato: What do you see Mr. Hyuuga?
Hiashi: Well............... the chakra isn't hurting them. It's surrounding them...... protecting them.
Minato: I can sense something.................. growing inside Naruto...............
Haishi: What is it Lord 4th???
Kurama/Minato: Love............
Kiba: Are you saying that their love is physically manifesting itself?
Hiashi: Based on what i see, i would come to that conclusion.
Minato: As i do.
Kiba: How is that possible.........
Minato: Love can do much, Naruto is experiencing this for the first time. Atleast by what i can sense coming from him.
Kurama: (Naruto........... are you ok?)
Naruto: (this.............this feeling. I've never............experienced this.............. feeling before. Her love, i can feel it............. It's so warm........... gentle............. comforting. I never want to lose.......... this feeling i have. This feeling in my heart.............. this is what love feels like.)
Kurama: (Shame i'm not human, otherwise i'd completely understand you but yes i do feel her love in your heart....... and your love for her is growing too.)
*meanwhile in the center of the shroud*
Naruto: Hinata?
Hinata: Yes?
Naruto: This feeling i have right now, the feeling in my heart. You have given me this feeling....... and i never want to lose them. Your love............. its given me strength, courage and it's given me.............you. I'm new too these feeling but i know you'll help me. I'm overwhelmed by your love.
Hinata: *Blushes* I'm sorry Naruto-kun.
Naruto: Don't be. *smilies* It feels nice Hinata. Your love feels warm, gentle, comforting.....supportive. Just like you.
Hinata: *face turns red* N-Naruto-kun.
Naruto: *laughs* I'm happy..... that i have these feeling right now........
Hinata: Naruto-kun....
Naruto: Yeah?
Hinata: Right now............ i feel safe with you. Protected... i feel like nothing bad will happen......
Naruto: As do i Hinata. I feel safe as well....... I feel an overwhleming sense of peace when i'm with you.
Hinata: I feel stronger when i'm around you.......... *they embrace eachother*
*outside of the shroud*
Haishi: They are fine, completely fine.
Kiba: What are they doing?
Hiashi: From what i can tell they are talking to eachother...........
Kiba: And?
Hiashi: None of your business. *stern look*
Minato: (Naruto, i can sense the happiness Hinata has brought you. You deserve it.)
*inside the shroud*
Naruto: When we get back to the village Hinata, you want to go out for some ramen?
Hinata: I'd love too Naruto-kun. *smilies*
Naruto: Thanks Hinata........... come on i think everyone is waiting for us.
Hinata: Ok.
*the shroud generally disapates and then disappears and Naruto and Hinata walk toward everyone*
Kiba: Yeah Naruto! Get some!!!!!
*Sakura punches Kiba*
Sakura: Shut up Kiba!!!! Moron!!!!!
Kurama: (Well i must say Naruto, you've completely suprised me when it came your handling of her. Very well done.)
Naruto: (*smilies* Thanks Kurama.)
Kurama: (too bad you kissed Saskue first.)
Naruto: (What was that!?!?!?!?!)
Kurama: (Eh....nothing. Nothing at all.)
Naruto: (I heard you.......*snort*)
*some time later*
Minato: Well son, its time for me and the rest of Hokages to leave.
Naruto: *depressed* I know dad.
Minato: Don't be sad son *gives Naruto a big fatherly hug* I'm very proud of you.
Naruto: Th.....thanks dad.
Minato: Where is Hinata at?
Naruto: *points* There, why?
Minato: I want too say something too her.
*Naruto runs and gets Hinata*
Hinata: Yes Lord 4th?
Minato: I know you love my son, i know you'll take care of him. I just wanted to thank you for filling my son with so much happiness.
Hinata: *blushing* it....it was nothing really Lord 4th.
Minato: Call me Minato.
Hinata: You sure?
Minato: Yeah, it's fine.
Hinata: Ok......Minato-kun.
Minato: *suprised* "Minato-kun"?
Naruto: *laughs* Thats Hinata dad, she always addresses people politely like that.
Minato: *short laugh* I see, thank you Hinata.
*Minato goes and joins the rest the Hokages and they disappear*
*Some time later, as everyone is walking to the Left, Naruto and Hinata lag back from everyone*
Naruto: *sad face*
Hinata: Whats the matter Naruto-kun?
Naruto: I'll never see my dad again.
Hinata: I'm sorry...........
Naruto: Don't be Hinata, i knew his time was short but he and mom gave me alot, so have you. *grabs Hinata hand*
Hinata: So have you Naruto-kun. *squezzes his hand*
*They lock eyes*
Kiba: So you are you two going out somewhere?
Naruto: K-Kiba!!
Hinata: Kiba-kun!!
Kiba: So? Where are you two going?
*Sakura and Ino grab Kiba*
Kiba: Hey, what the hell!?
Sakura: I'll teach you the meaning of the word "privacy."
Ino: Yeah with pain and broken bones.
Kiba: HELP!!!!!!!!!
*They take him away*
Naruto: I can't believe him.
Hinata: He always teases me for my feelings for you.
Naruto: Well i guess i'm the new member of the club. Come on Hinata, lets go.
Hinata: Ok Naruto-kun.
Not complete. But fixed.
Long post as well so. Enjoy.
Last edited by racefan1992 on Fri Aug 23, 2013 5:49 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Left out about 6 lines of dialouge, in case people wish to re-read it.)
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Re: Possible NaruHina Scenarios
by lily567 Thu Aug 22, 2013 10:17 am
I loved itracefan1992 wrote:51-Mustang gets credit for doing this before me, back in like the first pages of this thread. But this my 3rd and last one. More feels and Naruto/Kurama shangians and a metaphor.
- Spoiler:
Naruto: (Got any chakra left?)
Kurama: (Yeah, some. Why?)
Naruto: (Can i use it?)
Kurama: (It isn't much for you too use but go ahead and use it. Be careful tho, you don't have much left either.)
Naruto: (I'll be careful Kurama *joyious smile*)
Kurama: (Why is he so happy?)
Naruto: I'll help you Hinata.
Hinata: Your not a medic tho, Naruto-kun.
Naruto: So?
Hinata: ...............
Naruto: *grabs her hand and transforms*
Hinata: !!!!!! *starts feeling her strength returning* Naruto-kun, you don't really have too do this......
Naruto: Your right, i don't have too.......I want too.
HInata: ?
Naruto: Because you've done the same for me, many times Hinata.
Hinata: Naruto-kun?
*They stand up*
Minato: Son? *starts walking toward them*
Kurama: (You know you could have told me what your were going to do Naruto)
Naruto: (Sorry, i guess i wasn't thinking about you and me, only her well being.)
Kurama: (Well, just be straight with me next time. I'm fine with what your doing)
*Minato appears*
Naruto: Dad?
Hinata: Lord 4th?
Minato: You ok Son?
Naruto: *nods*
Minato: What about her?
Hinata: I'm...........i'm ok now. *starts blushing*
Minato: Well good.....*sees Naruto holding her hand* Is she your girlfriend?
Hinata: *looks away embrassed*
Naruto: *looks at Hinata then back at his dad* She is more too me then just that.
Minato/Hinata: Huh?
Naruto: Hinata has a strength that is greater then my own.
Hinata: Naruto-kun?
Minato: Son?
Naruto: It isn't a strength that comes from charkra or muscles, it comes from within Hinatas heart and soul.
Hinata: *looks down* (Naruto-kun)
Naruto: Hinata has given me so much. Strength, courage, determination but most importantly..........
Minato: ?
Naruto: An understanding of what love is. For the longest time, i didn't know what that felt like *looks at Hinata* but now i do. There have been times in my life when i needed support, i have friends who have been there for me, Hinata was there when i needed her most.
Minato: *listening entently* (I see......)
Naruto: There was a time when i was very depressed and unconfident about myself. I had alot of pressure on me *flashes back to the blood vow*. I didn't know if i could handle that pressure but Hinata told me how strong i was because i always had the strength to pick myself back up because "i think that is what true strength is." She thought i was incredible because of that. But in reality dad, Hinata is the incredible one.
Hinata: *starts crying* (N.......Naruto-kun)
Naruto: I first got to understand Hinata when she fought her cousin. Even tho she had no chance of beating him and he tried to break her spirite *flashes back to Nejis mental torture*. But, Hinata didn't give up. He knocked her down again and again. But Hinata got back to her feet. Neji was going to kill her but Hinata stood her ground.
Minato: Why?
Naruto: Because she wanted to change herself.
Minato: Huh?
Naruto: Hinata wanted too change because she wanted to be like me. *flashes back to Sakura and Lee telling him how similar they are*. Hinata was willing to die, just to change herself. Well *looks at Hinata*, i'd say she changed herself.........for the better. After that day, not only has Hinata has grown stronger and more confident as a ninja.................but as a person.
Hinata: *still crying but hiding it*
Naruto: And i met the real Hinata that day but i've seen that person many times afterword.
Minato: *still listening entily*
Naruto: A powerful enemy attacked our village, looking for me. Wanting to take me away. He destoried everything and killed alot of people. I told everyone to stay back because i was the only one who could defeat him. I did well against him but i was eventually pinned down. I was about too be taken away...... when Hinata stepped in to protect me. I told her to leave because i knew she had no chance of winning *flashes back to her protecting him* She stayied were she was and told that she knew she had no chance of winning but she wasn't going to leave me. And she told me why she was doing what she was doing........
Minato: ?
Naruto: Because i saved her.
Minato: Saved her? How?
Naruto: My smile, my postive attitude saved her from going down the wrong path. She told me that she always used to cry and give up because things were very difficult for her but when she looked at me, she felt full of courage and strength. It helped her keep going forward. But most importantly dad.........
Minato: ?
Naruto: *squeezes Hinatas hand* It because she loves me.
Minato: !?.....she.......she loves you?
Naruto: *nods* Yes, Hinata loves me. And that day she was willing to give all her strength.......and her life to protect me.
Minato: *flashes back to when he and Kushina protected Naruto as a baby from Kurama* (my........goodness..........*looks at Hinata*......this girl..........)
Naruto: That day......i'll never forget what she did for me. That day, i came to understand Hinata the person fully. I came to understand who she really was................. Hinata IS like me. What she did for me that day, was the biggest display of courage and strength i've ever seen anyone do. So, no Dad. Hinata isn't just my girlfriend, she is my courage, she is my strength, she is my inspiration and *smilies* she is me, minus some of qualities i got from mom.
Hinata: *still crying and hiding her tears*
Minato: *smilies* I see son, she is incredible. (wow, you'd never know it just by looking at her). And yes son, you do have some of your mothers qualities. But i see that Hinata has something me and Kushina share.
Naruto: Huh?
Minato: We love you, son. We always have and we always will love you. But what Hinata has isn't a parental love, it's a pure love. Unselfish love. From what you have told me of her, she is very unselfish and cares much about you and your well being.
Naruto: Oh.....ok, dad. I get it now. *laughs* Yes, Hinata is very unselfish. She has always been very nice too me. Although i do feel dumb for not noticing her feelings sooner. *sad face*
Minato: Well son, you know now don't you?
Naruto: Yeah, yeah i do. *smilies*
Minato: Then i have a question for you son?
Naruto: Huh? What?
Minato: Are you happy with her by yourside?
Naruto: Yes dad. *looks at Hinata* i am happy with her *looks back to Minato* by my side. I feel joy and happiness with her by me. I'm over joyied to have met someone like Hinata in my life. My admiration for her is limitless........
Minato: Then that is all i need know son. I'm sure you know that my time here is limited but now i can return to Kushina knowing that our son is happy, very happy.
Naruto: And healthy, don't forget healthy. Mom would bring that up.
Minato: *laughs* yes, she would bring that up.
*cue father/son laugh*
Minato: But seriously son, i do know that Kushina would happy know that our son is loved by someone who loves him truthfully and honestly, with all her heart for who you are. I know i'm happy son. *big smile*
Naruto: *starts crying* I know you and mom are happy for me and i'm glad too be your son.
Minato: And me and Kushina are glad we have you as a son. I can return to her knowing that our son is well taken care off and loved deeply.
Naruto: *wipes away tears* Your leaving now?
Minato: No son, i still have alittle time left here, so i'll help out with the wounded. I"m not a medical ninja but i can help out in some way.
Naruto: Oh, ok dad.
Minato: Don't worry son, i'll say goodbye, since i couldn't do it properly last time. Besides *looks at Hinata* i think you and Hinata deserve some alone time together before we all head back to our respective villiages. You may not have much time to talk and interact afterword, so just some fatherly advice "do it while you can." *smilies*
Naruto: *smilies back* Ok dad.
Minato: I'll leave you two be then. *turns around and leaves*. (Wow, Hinata is incredible. When i think of it, she kinda reminds of Kushina in someways and.............she reminds me of myself as well. I also see Naruto in her. I can tell Naruto has effected alot of people in his life but none more so then Hinata it seems. *looks back* I"m glad he found the happiness he deserves too have. I do feel guilty about leaving him to fend for himself at such a young age but............ I'm glad he found friends and someone who loves him very much)
Fodder ninja: Lord 4th over here, we could use some help!
Minato: Ok, i'm coming!
*runs*
Kurama: (wow, that was touching.)
Naruto: (are you being a smart ass?)
Kurama: (Nope, i'm serious. I never really thought you'd say such things.)
Naruto: (well, Hinata brings out of me i guess)
Kurama: (come on *nudge,nudge* you do have a soft spot for her)
Naruto: (*blushing* Quit teasing me while ya?)
Kurama: (Nope, i'm having too much fun. But seriously i've felt things in your heart when something happens to her. There is big place in your heart for her.)
Naruto: (*scratching the back of his head and blushing* I.....i guess so.)
Kurama: (don't play that game with me, YOU DO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
Naruto: (Ugh.)
Kurama: (Is it really so hard to admit it? Your mom didn't have a problem with saying such things. I felt what she felt and i feel what you feel.)
Naruto: (*red faced with embrassment* She.............she does mean alot too me)
Kurama: (i know you didn't say out loud from your pie hole but tell her yourself. I'm willing to bet your dad figured it out even without you saying it)
Naruto: (oh......ok.)
Kurama: (good boy)
Naruto: Say........Hinata...............i...uh...........Huh? *sees her crying* Hey, whats the matter?
Hinata: *trying not to break down* I......n.....no ones ever.....given me......s-such praise........before. *sniff* Not even.....my own father. *sniff*
Naruto: (He has never given her praise? What the hell........)
Hinata: Hearing...........those....words.....coming from you......Naruto-kun. They.......they mean so such too me. I just....... *sniff* don't know....what to say...*sniff/wipes away tears*
Naruto: *softly smiles and hugs her* You don't have to say anything Hinata.
Hinata: *breaks down*
Naruto: You deserve such praise Hinata. For all you've been through, you've come out of it a better ninja and person. *flashes back too all the momenst he and Hinata have had*. You ARE incredible, i can say that with confidence because it is true. Where you are from when i first met you to where you are now, it isn't even funny. You've grown stronger over that time, i see it. Not just your physical strength but your inner strength as well. You shocked me by how you fought Neji. You weren't even in his league but you still gave everything you had, almost your life. I may have cheered you on but you still proven me wrong.
Hinata: *crying............ 'huh?'*
Naruto: My first opinion of you was wrong, so wrong. I kinda feel bad for how i viewed you. But i'm happy to admit that i was wrong about you. But you further showed me how wrong i was for what you did against Pain. *flashes back* What i said before about what you did is true.....THAT was the biggest display of courage and strength i've seen ANYONE do. You knew you might not see me again and spoke from heart about how you felt about me. You gave everything for me....everything, including your life. You didn't have to do that......
Hinata: *crying........'i wanted to protect you'..........*
Naruto: I know....... you told me why you wanted to protect me............ and i have nothing but admiration for what you did. Because of what you did, i was able to met my mom and dad. They told me of what they did for me when i was young. I got too know what a parents love felt like. But what you did for me, i got too know what YOUR love felt like. Of course i was shocked by what you said but after i had sometime to think about it............. i know where my feelings are.
*Naruto caresses Hinatas face and wipes away her tears*
Naruto: I........i love you Hinata.
Hinata: Hhhhhuh?
Naruto: I love you. At first didn't understand what love meant but now i know what love means....you helped me come to that conclusion.
Kurama: (Huh? *senses something* What is this.....this.....feeling?)
Hinata: I........i did?
Naruto: Yes, you showed me that love always gives, it never wants. You have been very patient with me and waited for me. You let me figure things out and never pushed me for an answer. You were always by my side even when i didn't think very much of you, you were there next too me.......... cheering and supporting me.
Hinata: *graps his hands* Naruto-kun?
Naruto: Hinata, you hold.............. a large place in my heart. The more i've thougth about what you've done for me, that bigger it has gotten. I've done alot of things by myself... but there are things that i can't do alone.........
Hinata: I'll help you with those things Naruto-kun.
Naruto: Thank you Hinata. But i know there is one thing you can help me with......
Hinata: What?
Naruto: I love you but i've never had a kiss before so....
Hinata: You don't have to say anymore Naruto-kun..........
*they kiss*
Kurama: (Holy................. where the hell is this coming from!?)
*a shroud of chakra starts surrounding Naruto and Hinata*
Kiba: Hey, Hinata i found you a.......huh?
Minato: *senses something and looks in Narutos direction* Son?
Everyone else: *looks in Naruto and Hinatas direction*
Kurama: (Naruto? Are you creating this.......or is she doing it? no........it's........)
*the shroud continues to grow in size and intensity around them*
Kiba: Hey, what the hell is going on here?
Minato: I'm.......i'm not sure *puzzled*.
Kiba: we have too help them!
Hiashi: No wait!
Kiba: What do you mean wait?
Hiashi: i can see what is going on.............
Minato: What do you see Mr. Hyuuga?
Hiashi: Well............... the chakra isn't hurting them. It's surrounding them...... protecting them.
Minato: I can sense something.................. growing inside Naruto...............
Haishi: What is it Lord 4th???
Kurama/Minato: Love............
Kiba: Are you saying that their love is physically manifesting itself?
Hiashi: Based on what i see, i would come to that conclusion.
Minato: As i do.
Kiba: How is that possible.........
Minato: Love can do much, Naruto is experiencing this for the first time. Atleast by what i can sense coming from him.
Kurama: (Naruto........... are you ok?)
Naruto: (this.............this feeling. I've never............experienced this.............. feeling before. Her love, i can feel it............. It's so warm........... gentle............. comforting. I never want to lose.......... this feeling i have. This feeling in my heart.............. this is what love feels like.)
Kurama: (Shame i'm not human, otherwise i'd completely understand you but yes i do feel her love in your heart....... and your love for her is growing too.)
*meanwhile in the center of the shroud*
Naruto: Hinata?
Hinata: Yes?
Naruto: This feeling i have right now, the feeling in my heart. You have given me this feeling....... and i never want to lose them. Your love............. its given me strength, courage and it's given me.............you. I'm new too these feeling but i know you'll help me. I'm overwhelmed by your love.
Hinata: *Blushes* I'm sorry Naruto-kun.
Naruto: Don't be. *smilies* It feels nice Hinata. Your love feels warm, gentle, comforting.....supportive. Just like you.
Hinata: *face turns red* N-Naruto-kun.
Naruto: *laughs* I'm happy..... that i have these feeling right now........
Hinata: Naruto-kun....
Naruto: Yeah?
Hinata: Right now............ i feel safe with you. Protected... i feel like nothing bad will happen......
Naruto: As do i Hinata. I feel safe as well....... I feel an overwhleming sense of peace when i'm with you.
Hinata: I feel stronger when i'm around you.......... *they embrace eachother*
*outside of the shroud*
Haishi: They are fine, completely fine.
Kiba: What are they doing?
Hiashi: From what i can tell they are talking to eachother...........
Kiba: And?
Hiashi: None of your business. *stern look*
Minato: (Naruto, i can sense the happiness Hinata has brought you. You deserve it.)
*inside the shroud*
Naruto: When we get back to the village Hinata, you want to go out for some ramen?
Hinata: I'd love too Naruto-kun. *smilies*
Naruto: Thanks Hinata........... come on i think everyone is waiting for us.
Hinata: Ok.
*the shroud generally disapates and then disappears and Naruto and Hinata walk toward everyone*
Kiba: Yeah Naruto! Get some!!!!!
*Sakura punches Kiba*
Sakura: Shut up Kiba!!!! Moron!!!!!
Kurama: (Well i must say Naruto, you've completely suprised me when it came your handling of her. Very well done.)
Naruto: (*smilies* Thanks Kurama.)
Kurama: (too bad you kissed Saskue first.)
Naruto: (What was that!?!?!?!?!)
Kurama: (Eh....nothing. Nothing at all.)
Naruto: (I heard you.......*snort*)
*some time later*
Minato: Well son, its time for me and the rest of Hokages to leave.
Naruto: *depressed* I know dad.
Minato: Don't be sad son *gives Naruto a big fatherly hug* I'm very proud of you.
Naruto: Th.....thanks dad.
Minato: Where is Hinata at?
Naruto: *points* There, why?
Minato: I want too say something too her.
*Naruto runs and gets Hinata*
Hinata: Yes Lord 4th?
Minato: I know you love my son, i know you'll take care of him. I just wanted to thank you for filling my son with so much happiness.
Hinata: *blushing* it....it was nothing really Lord 4th.
Minato: Call me Minato.
Hinata: You sure?
Minato: Yeah, it's fine.
Hinata: Ok......Minato-kun.
Minato: *suprised* "Minato-kun"?
Naruto: *laughs* Thats Hinata dad, she always addresses people politely like that.
Minato: *short laugh* I see, thank you Hinata.
*Minato goes and joins the rest the Hokages and they disappear*
*Some time later, as everyone is walking to the Left, Naruto and Hinata lag back from everyone*
Naruto: *sad face*
Hinata: Whats the matter Naruto-kun?
Naruto: I'll never see my dad again.
Hinata: I'm sorry...........
Naruto: Don't be Hinata, i knew his time was short but he and mom gave me alot, so have you. *grabs Hinata hand*
Hinata: So have you Naruto-kun. *squezzes his hand*
*They lock eyes*
Kiba: So you are you two going out somewhere?
Naruto: K-Kiba!!
Hinata: Kiba-kun!!
Kiba: So? Where are you two going?
*Sakura and Ino grab Kiba*
Kiba: Hey, what the hell!?
Sakura: I'll teach you the meaning of the word "privacy."
Ino: Yeah with pain and broken bones.
Kiba: HELP!!!!!!!!!
*They take him away*
Naruto: I can't believe him.
Hinata: He always teases me for my feelings for you.
Naruto: Well i guess i'm the new member of the club. Come on Hinata, lets go.
Hinata: Ok Naruto-kun.
Long post as well so. Enjoy.
+1repbeautiful and the comedy was good too
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Re: Possible NaruHina Scenarios
by kagome1991 Thu Aug 22, 2013 10:54 am
That...That was...so beautiful!racefan1992 wrote:51-Mustang gets credit for doing this before me, back in like the first pages of this thread. But this my 3rd and last one. More feels and Naruto/Kurama shangians and a metaphor.
- Spoiler:
Naruto: (Got any chakra left?)
Kurama: (Yeah, some. Why?)
Naruto: (Can i use it?)
Kurama: (It isn't much for you too use but go ahead and use it. Be careful tho, you don't have much left either.)
Naruto: (I'll be careful Kurama *joyious smile*)
Kurama: (Why is he so happy?)
Naruto: I'll help you Hinata.
Hinata: Your not a medic tho, Naruto-kun.
Naruto: So?
Hinata: ...............
Naruto: *grabs her hand and transforms*
Hinata: !!!!!! *starts feeling her strength returning* Naruto-kun, you don't really have too do this......
Naruto: Your right, i don't have too.......I want too.
HInata: ?
Naruto: Because you've done the same for me, many times Hinata.
Hinata: Naruto-kun?
*They stand up*
Minato: Son? *starts walking toward them*
Kurama: (You know you could have told me what your were going to do Naruto)
Naruto: (Sorry, i guess i wasn't thinking about you and me, only her well being.)
Kurama: (Well, just be straight with me next time. I'm fine with what your doing)
*Minato appears*
Naruto: Dad?
Hinata: Lord 4th?
Minato: You ok Son?
Naruto: *nods*
Minato: What about her?
Hinata: I'm...........i'm ok now. *starts blushing*
Minato: Well good.....*sees Naruto holding her hand* Is she your girlfriend?
Hinata: *looks away embrassed*
Naruto: *looks at Hinata then back at his dad* She is more too me then just that.
Minato/Hinata: Huh?
Naruto: Hinata has a strength that is greater then my own.
Hinata: Naruto-kun?
Minato: Son?
Naruto: It isn't a strength that comes from charkra or muscles, it comes from within Hinatas heart and soul.
Hinata: *looks down* (Naruto-kun)
Naruto: Hinata has given me so much. Strength, courage, determination but most importantly..........
Minato: ?
Naruto: An understanding of what love is. For the longest time, i didn't know what that felt like *looks at Hinata* but now i do. There have been times in my life when i needed support, i have friends who have been there for me, Hinata was there when i needed her most.
Minato: *listening entently* (I see......)
Naruto: There was a time when i was very depressed and unconfident about myself. I had alot of pressure on me *flashes back to the blood vow*. I didn't know if i could handle that pressure but Hinata told me how strong i was because i always had the strength to pick myself back up because "i think that is what true strength is." She thought i was incredible because of that. But in reality dad, Hinata is the incredible one.
Hinata: *starts crying* (N.......Naruto-kun)
Naruto: I first got to understand Hinata when she fought her cousin. Even tho she had no chance of beating him and he tried to break her spirite *flashes back to Nejis mental torture*. But, Hinata didn't give up. He knocked her down again and again. But Hinata got back to her feet. Neji was going to kill her but Hinata stood her ground.
Minato: Why?
Naruto: Because she wanted to change herself.
Minato: Huh?
Naruto: Hinata wanted too change because she wanted to be like me. *flashes back to Sakura and Lee telling him how similar they are*. Hinata was willing to die, just to change herself. Well *looks at Hinata*, i'd say she changed herself.........for the better. After that day, not only has Hinata has grown stronger and more confident as a ninja.................but as a person.
Hinata: *still crying but hiding it*
Naruto: And i met the real Hinata that day but i've seen that person many times afterword.
Minato: *still listening entily*
Naruto: A powerful enemy attacked our village, looking for me. Wanting to take me away. He destoried everything and killed alot of people. I told everyone to stay back because i was the only one who could defeat him. I did well against him but i was eventually pinned down. I was about too be taken away...... when Hinata stepped in to protect me. I told her to leave because i knew she had no chance of winning *flashes back to her protecting him* She stayied were she was and told that she knew she had no chance of winning but she wasn't going to leave me. And she told me why she was doing what she was doing........
Minato: ?
Naruto: Because i saved her.
Minato: Saved her? How?
Naruto: My smile, my postive attitude saved her from going down the wrong path. She told me that she always used to cry and give up because things were very difficult for her but when she looked at me, she felt full of courage and strength. It helped her keep going forward. But most importantly dad.........
Minato: ?
Naruto: *squeezes Hinatas hand* It because she loves me.
Minato: !?.....she.......she loves you?
Naruto: *nods* Yes, Hinata loves me. And that day she was willing to give all her strength.......and her life to protect me.
Minato: *flashes back to when he and Kushina protected Naruto as a baby from Kurama* (my........goodness..........*looks at Hinata*......this girl..........)
Naruto: That day......i'll never forget what she did for me. That day, i came to understand Hinata the person fully. I came to understand who she really was................. Hinata IS like me. What she did for me that day, was the biggest display of courage and strength i've ever seen anyone do. So, no Dad. Hinata isn't just my girlfriend, she is my courage, she is my strength, she is my inspiration and *smilies* she is me, minus some of qualities i got from mom.
Hinata: *still crying and hiding her tears*
Minato: *smilies* I see son, she is incredible. (wow, you'd never know it just by looking at her). And yes son, you do have some of your mothers qualities. But i see that Hinata has something me and Kushina share.
Naruto: Huh?
Minato: We love you, son. We always have and we always will love you. But what Hinata has isn't a parental love, it's a pure love. Unselfish love. From what you have told me of her, she is very unselfish and cares much about you and your well being.
Naruto: Oh.....ok, dad. I get it now. *laughs* Yes, Hinata is very unselfish. She has always been very nice too me. Although i do feel dumb for not noticing her feelings sooner. *sad face*
Minato: Well son, you know now don't you?
Naruto: Yeah, yeah i do. *smilies*
Minato: Then i have a question for you son?
Naruto: Huh? What?
Minato: Are you happy with her by yourside?
Naruto: Yes dad. *looks at Hinata* i am happy with her *looks back to Minato* by my side. I feel joy and happiness with her by me. I'm over joyied to have met someone like Hinata in my life. My admiration for her is limitless........
Minato: Then that is all i need know son. I'm sure you know that my time here is limited but now i can return to Kushina knowing that our son is happy, very happy.
Naruto: And healthy, don't forget healthy. Mom would bring that up.
Minato: *laughs* yes, she would bring that up.
*cue father/son laugh*
Minato: But seriously son, i do know that Kushina would happy know that our son is loved by someone who loves him truthfully and honestly, with all her heart for who you are. I know i'm happy son. *big smile*
Naruto: *starts crying* I know you and mom are happy for me and i'm glad too be your son.
Minato: And me and Kushina are glad we have you as a son. I can return to her knowing that our son is well taken care off and loved deeply.
Naruto: *wipes away tears* Your leaving now?
Minato: No son, i still have alittle time left here, so i'll help out with the wounded. I"m not a medical ninja but i can help out in some way.
Naruto: Oh, ok dad.
Minato: Don't worry son, i'll say goodbye, since i couldn't do it properly last time. Besides *looks at Hinata* i think you and Hinata deserve some alone time together before we all head back to our respective villiages. You may not have much time to talk and interact afterword, so just some fatherly advice "do it while you can." *smilies*
Naruto: *smilies back* Ok dad.
Minato: I'll leave you two be then. *turns around and leaves*. (Wow, Hinata is incredible. When i think of it, she kinda reminds of Kushina in someways and.............she reminds me of myself as well. I also see Naruto in her. I can tell Naruto has effected alot of people in his life but none more so then Hinata it seems. *looks back* I"m glad he found the happiness he deserves too have. I do feel guilty about leaving him to fend for himself at such a young age but............ I'm glad he found friends and someone who loves him very much)
Fodder ninja: Lord 4th over here, we could use some help!
Minato: Ok, i'm coming!
*runs*
Kurama: (wow, that was touching.)
Naruto: (are you being a smart ass?)
Kurama: (Nope, i'm serious. I never really thought you'd say such things.)
Naruto: (well, Hinata brings out of me i guess)
Kurama: (come on *nudge,nudge* you do have a soft spot for her)
Naruto: (*blushing* Quit teasing me while ya?)
Kurama: (Nope, i'm having too much fun. But seriously i've felt things in your heart when something happens to her. There is big place in your heart for her.)
Naruto: (*scratching the back of his head and blushing* I.....i guess so.)
Kurama: (don't play that game with me, YOU DO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
Naruto: (Ugh.)
Kurama: (Is it really so hard to admit it? Your mom didn't have a problem with saying such things. I felt what she felt and i feel what you feel.)
Naruto: (*red faced with embrassment* She.............she does mean alot too me)
Kurama: (i know you didn't say out loud from your pie hole but tell her yourself. I'm willing to bet your dad figured it out even without you saying it)
Naruto: (oh......ok.)
Kurama: (good boy)
Naruto: Say........Hinata...............i...uh...........Huh? *sees her crying* Hey, whats the matter?
Hinata: *trying not to break down* I......n.....no ones ever.....given me......s-such praise........before. *sniff* Not even.....my own father. *sniff*
Naruto: (He has never given her praise? What the hell........)
Hinata: Hearing...........those....words.....coming from you......Naruto-kun. They.......they mean so such too me. I just....... *sniff* don't know....what to say...*sniff/wipes away tears*
Naruto: *softly smiles and hugs her* You don't have to say anything Hinata.
Hinata: *breaks down*
Naruto: You deserve such praise Hinata. For all you've been through, you've come out of it a better ninja and person. *flashes back too all the momenst he and Hinata have had*. You ARE incredible, i can say that with confidence because it is true. Where you are from when i first met you to where you are now, it isn't even funny. You've grown stronger over that time, i see it. Not just your physical strength but your inner strength as well. You shocked me by how you fought Neji. You weren't even in his league but you still gave everything you had, almost your life. I may have cheered you on but you still proven me wrong.
Hinata: *crying............ 'huh?'*
Naruto: My first opinion of you was wrong, so wrong. I kinda feel bad for how i viewed you. But i'm happy to admit that i was wrong about you. But you further showed me how wrong i was for what you did against Pain. *flashes back* What i said before about what you did is true.....THAT was the biggest display of courage and strength i've seen ANYONE do. You knew you might not see me again and spoke from heart about how you felt about me. You gave everything for me....everything, including your life. You didn't have to do that......
Hinata: *crying........'i wanted to protect you'..........*
Naruto: I know....... you told me why you wanted to protect me............ and i have nothing but admiration for what you did. Because of what you did, i was able to met my mom and dad. They told me of what they did for me when i was young. I got too know what a parents love felt like. But what you did for me, i got too know what YOUR love felt like. Of course i was shocked by what you said but after i had sometime to think about it............. i know where my feelings are.
*Naruto caresses Hinatas face and wipes away her tears*
Naruto: I........i love you Hinata.
Hinata: Hhhhhuh?
Naruto: I love you. At first didn't understand what love meant but now i know what love means....you helped me come to that conclusion.
Kurama: (Huh? *senses something* What is this.....this.....feeling?)
Hinata: I........i did?
Naruto: Yes, you showed me that love always gives, it never wants. You have been very patient with me and waited for me. You let me figure things out and never pushed me for an answer. You were always by my side even when i didn't think very much of you, you were there next too me.......... cheering and supporting me.
Hinata: *graps his hands* Naruto-kun?
Naruto: Hinata, you hold.............. a large place in my heart. The more i've thougth about what you've done for me, that bigger it has gotten. I've done alot of things by myself... but there are things that i can't do alone.........
Hinata: I'll help you with those things Naruto-kun.
Naruto: Thank you Hinata. But i know there is one thing you can help me with......
Hinata: What?
Naruto: I love you but i've never had a kiss before so....
Hinata: You don't have to say anymore Naruto-kun..........
*they kiss*
Kurama: (Holy................. where the hell is this coming from!?)
*a shroud of chakra starts surrounding Naruto and Hinata*
Kiba: Hey, Hinata i found you a.......huh?
Minato: *senses something and looks in Narutos direction* Son?
Everyone else: *looks in Naruto and Hinatas direction*
Kurama: (Naruto? Are you creating this.......or is she doing it? no........it's........)
*the shroud continues to grow in size and intensity around them*
Kiba: Hey, what the hell is going on here?
Minato: I'm.......i'm not sure *puzzled*.
Kiba: we have too help them!
Hiashi: No wait!
Kiba: What do you mean wait?
Hiashi: i can see what is going on.............
Minato: What do you see Mr. Hyuuga?
Hiashi: Well............... the chakra isn't hurting them. It's surrounding them...... protecting them.
Minato: I can sense something.................. growing inside Naruto...............
Haishi: What is it Lord 4th???
Kurama/Minato: Love............
Kiba: Are you saying that their love is physically manifesting itself?
Hiashi: Based on what i see, i would come to that conclusion.
Minato: As i do.
Kiba: How is that possible.........
Minato: Love can do much, Naruto is experiencing this for the first time. Atleast by what i can sense coming from him.
Kurama: (Naruto........... are you ok?)
Naruto: (this.............this feeling. I've never............experienced this.............. feeling before. Her love, i can feel it............. It's so warm........... gentle............. comforting. I never want to lose.......... this feeling i have. This feeling in my heart.............. this is what love feels like.)
Kurama: (Shame i'm not human, otherwise i'd completely understand you but yes i do feel her love in your heart....... and your love for her is growing too.)
*meanwhile in the center of the shroud*
Naruto: Hinata?
Hinata: Yes?
Naruto: This feeling i have right now, the feeling in my heart. You have given me this feeling....... and i never want to lose them. Your love............. its given me strength, courage and it's given me.............you. I'm new too these feeling but i know you'll help me. I'm overwhelmed by your love.
Hinata: *Blushes* I'm sorry Naruto-kun.
Naruto: Don't be. *smilies* It feels nice Hinata. Your love feels warm, gentle, comforting.....supportive. Just like you.
Hinata: *face turns red* N-Naruto-kun.
Naruto: *laughs* I'm happy..... that i have these feeling right now........
Hinata: Naruto-kun....
Naruto: Yeah?
Hinata: Right now............ i feel safe with you. Protected... i feel like nothing bad will happen......
Naruto: As do i Hinata. I feel safe as well....... I feel an overwhleming sense of peace when i'm with you.
Hinata: I feel stronger when i'm around you.......... *they embrace eachother*
*outside of the shroud*
Haishi: They are fine, completely fine.
Kiba: What are they doing?
Hiashi: From what i can tell they are talking to eachother...........
Kiba: And?
Hiashi: None of your business. *stern look*
Minato: (Naruto, i can sense the happiness Hinata has brought you. You deserve it.)
*inside the shroud*
Naruto: When we get back to the village Hinata, you want to go out for some ramen?
Hinata: I'd love too Naruto-kun. *smilies*
Naruto: Thanks Hinata........... come on i think everyone is waiting for us.
Hinata: Ok.
*the shroud generally disapates and then disappears and Naruto and Hinata walk toward everyone*
Kiba: Yeah Naruto! Get some!!!!!
*Sakura punches Kiba*
Sakura: Shut up Kiba!!!! Moron!!!!!
Kurama: (Well i must say Naruto, you've completely suprised me when it came your handling of her. Very well done.)
Naruto: (*smilies* Thanks Kurama.)
Kurama: (too bad you kissed Saskue first.)
Naruto: (What was that!?!?!?!?!)
Kurama: (Eh....nothing. Nothing at all.)
Naruto: (I heard you.......*snort*)
*some time later*
Minato: Well son, its time for me and the rest of Hokages to leave.
Naruto: *depressed* I know dad.
Minato: Don't be sad son *gives Naruto a big fatherly hug* I'm very proud of you.
Naruto: Th.....thanks dad.
Minato: Where is Hinata at?
Naruto: *points* There, why?
Minato: I want too say something too her.
*Naruto runs and gets Hinata*
Hinata: Yes Lord 4th?
Minato: I know you love my son, i know you'll take care of him. I just wanted to thank you for filling my son with so much happiness.
Hinata: *blushing* it....it was nothing really Lord 4th.
Minato: Call me Minato.
Hinata: You sure?
Minato: Yeah, it's fine.
Hinata: Ok......Minato-kun.
Minato: *suprised* "Minato-kun"?
Naruto: *laughs* Thats Hinata dad, she always addresses people politely like that.
Minato: *short laugh* I see, thank you Hinata.
*Minato goes and joins the rest the Hokages and they disappear*
*Some time later, as everyone is walking to the Left, Naruto and Hinata lag back from everyone*
Naruto: *sad face*
Hinata: Whats the matter Naruto-kun?
Naruto: I'll never see my dad again.
Hinata: I'm sorry...........
Naruto: Don't be Hinata, i knew his time was short but he and mom gave me alot, so have you. *grabs Hinata hand*
Hinata: So have you Naruto-kun. *squezzes his hand*
*They lock eyes*
Kiba: So you are you two going out somewhere?
Naruto: K-Kiba!!
Hinata: Kiba-kun!!
Kiba: So? Where are you two going?
*Sakura and Ino grab Kiba*
Kiba: Hey, what the hell!?
Sakura: I'll teach you the meaning of the word "privacy."
Ino: Yeah with pain and broken bones.
Kiba: HELP!!!!!!!!!
*They take him away*
Naruto: I can't believe him.
Hinata: He always teases me for my feelings for you.
Naruto: Well i guess i'm the new member of the club. Come on Hinata, lets go.
Hinata: Ok Naruto-kun.
Long post as well so. Enjoy.
Really and truly! I seriously sat here with tear in my eyes and laughing like a maniac. +rep Great job.
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