Stay Classy Babe.
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NekoKimio
eromreven
Icarus
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Stay Classy Babe.
Heh, lets see if anyone can guess my muse for this one.
As always, if you see a grammatical error please point it out.
Stay classy babe.
A wise man once said something mystical and marvelous. But I am not that man. I'm just... Me I guess. I'm not normal. I have my issues. I have my problems that I need to work on. I've got those parts of me I don't want you to see. I have a lot of weight on my shoulders bearing down on me, and wind behind my feet pushing me along. But I won't let you judge me, I won't give you the fucking time of day if you think you'll get away. I'm my own fucking man, I do as I say and as I will. And it's fucked up how you think you'll change me again. I'm not made of clay anymore, my bones are iron now babe. So the man who once said something meaningful, fuck him. I'll write my own life. This is my fucking story, and you won't be a part of it like I once thought you'd be. Don't worry though babe, I won't write you out in a destructive way, I'm a bit more classy than that as I'm sure you don't know. I've never showed you this side of me, for that I apologize, but it's a better me. It's one ill show from now till the end of time when I'm lost and forgotten. It's the best parts of me I've jumbled together. But as I said before, the are bad parts of me, but I'll work on that. It's not your problem. Heh, as if it was in the first place.
As always, if you see a grammatical error please point it out.
Stay classy babe.
A wise man once said something mystical and marvelous. But I am not that man. I'm just... Me I guess. I'm not normal. I have my issues. I have my problems that I need to work on. I've got those parts of me I don't want you to see. I have a lot of weight on my shoulders bearing down on me, and wind behind my feet pushing me along. But I won't let you judge me, I won't give you the fucking time of day if you think you'll get away. I'm my own fucking man, I do as I say and as I will. And it's fucked up how you think you'll change me again. I'm not made of clay anymore, my bones are iron now babe. So the man who once said something meaningful, fuck him. I'll write my own life. This is my fucking story, and you won't be a part of it like I once thought you'd be. Don't worry though babe, I won't write you out in a destructive way, I'm a bit more classy than that as I'm sure you don't know. I've never showed you this side of me, for that I apologize, but it's a better me. It's one ill show from now till the end of time when I'm lost and forgotten. It's the best parts of me I've jumbled together. But as I said before, the are bad parts of me, but I'll work on that. It's not your problem. Heh, as if it was in the first place.
Icarus- Posts : 114
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Re: Stay Classy Babe.
Good guess. I can see where you're coming from, but no. It is my ode to an ex-girlfriend. xD
Icarus- Posts : 114
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eromreven- Posts : 458
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Re: Stay Classy Babe.
Awesome, just simply awesome. I like the emotion conveyed and how it builds up in the beginning and, although short, it ends on a high note.
Great job :D
Great job :D
Amoroq- Posts : 30
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Re: Stay Classy Babe.
This is kind of... sexy. For the lack of a better word. LOL.
Strawberry- Posts : 931
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Re: Stay Classy Babe.
Sexy wasn't what I was going for, but I'll take it. ;D
Icarus- Posts : 114
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Re: Stay Classy Babe.
Indeederomreven wrote:Sexy is good.
Azuula- Posts : 1202
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Re: Stay Classy Babe.
Okay, I'll stay.
..see what I did there?
Lol no, that was really good.
It's been here for a while, surprised I haven't seen this sooner. :O
..see what I did there?
Lol no, that was really good.
It's been here for a while, surprised I haven't seen this sooner. :O
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Location : California, it ain't that sunny..
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